The Evolution of Writing on the Web

A non-functional wire sculpture of a toilet.
By CCRI Artdepartment

Why New Styles are Needed

  • Articles should be swifter for the web.
  • People want to read less as they have more to read.
  • Top ten lists and bullet-point articles make it easier to get through.
  • You can skip around between parts, pick up where you left off.

How Did We Write?

  • Old writing was based on a longer attention span.
  • It had deeper stylistic integrity that the form afforded.
  • Structures of sections of paragraphs of sentences of words.

The New Style, Evolved from the Old

  • Headings of bullets of sentences of words.
  • Pictures to anchor each part (not shown here).
  • Barer sentences, with less complexity.
  • Like a powerpoint put through a wringer.

The Old Style Lives On

  • Books and periodicals, along with some traditionalist sites.
  • Nice for articles you want to go deeper into.
  • Side-by-side old and new allows for reader choice.

Benefits of the New Style

  • Students learn outline forms more easily.
  • Reading comprehension goes up for the new form.
  • Discussion is simplified through easily-referenced sentences?
  • Improves collaborative editing and creation.

Downsides of the New Style

  • Students dislike the old style even more than they already did.
  • Comprehension of the old style diminishes further.
  • Discussions are based on less nuance (Fox Newsier discussions prevail).

I Dunno.

  • I’m curious whether this sort of writing style should become more dominant.
  • I think it has some benefits for the way people use the modern web.
    • Easier to read casually.
    • Possibly more accessible to AI.
    • Less opportunity for verbosity.
  • So I wrote this in a version of what the new style may be, to see what it’s like.
  • Oy vey. I’m hoping that there can be some balance. I do think language and writing styles need to evolve to fit the needs of readers, and long-winded writing can be a pain to read (especially as the number of things to read grows), but let’s hope it won’t be a bullet-point-riddled future.
  • One promising alternative is that AI will allow for real-time reorganization/editing of long texts to elicit the parts the reader is most interested in.